2nd Draft

Keeping in mind what my teacher told me to change I made the following changes:

The first one is the font of the numbers on each page which I changed to match the titles.

I started by applying some changes to the covers as they are the first thing the public interacts with. The first change is the black and white filter that gives a mysterious and professional look.

Next up I added the main cover line, which is the title of the feature article, to improve the conventions. Also, a white frame gave the cover a cleaner look with the model in front of it. The frame will be a statement piece in each magazine made by Fashion Groove in the future. On the back cover, I added the brand logo and moved the barcode to the top right corner in line with the logo.

The only change made on the contents page was the addition of the white line before the title which goes across both pages to create a continuation of the pages.

At all the feature article pages the changes made were mostly the same as the most noticeable is the dividing text at each page to make it look fuller. The smaller box also has another purpose, to make a connection to the present day. The biggest change was at the hip hop page as I wasn't satisfied with the look of it therefore made a colour pallet change and added some items of resemblance with the hip hop genre. I tried to make the pages fuller by adding at each genre some specific items such as musical notes, hand gestures, horseshoes, hats, etc... Also in the text, I made some resemblance words bold because I wanted to make them stand out.