Feedback session

Show my Draft to receive feedback from anyone. ( parents) mention the feedback and use it

For feedback, I asked my tutor (Ruxandra Bratfalean-Igna) for an honest opinion on the first draft. She said that the magazine looks good but still needs work mostly on conventions.

This is the text I received from her:

 "You can follow the conventions in more detail, including more details on text sizes, colours, frames, bleed, page composition, relevant information or quotes, the name of the article author, the contact on the back cover, etc."

After this advice, I went back to research the conventions to include them into my magazine and make it look more professional. Then the next step will be editing the magazine again.